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The Karenina Chronicles: “An Unforgettable Heroine and a Rich World of Characters”

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Reviewed by Demetria Head for Reader Views 

The Karenina Chronicles is book five in the Waterspell series but can easily be read as a standalone tale. This is a fantasy adventure that covers not just expansive worldbuilding, but also personal losses and healing. The story takes place in the Waterspell universe. Readers get to follow Lady Karenina of Ruain. After her husband passes, she takes a journey to an unfamiliar place. It starts as just an attempt to outrun grief, but it becomes her way to find her identity and purpose.

The Karenina Chronicles: A Waterspell Novel by Deborah J. Lightfoot

As the story begins, Nina has spent a great deal of her life wielding immense power, but now she questions everything. She teases her younger brother Dalton while they are aboard a ship on the waters of Ladrehdin. She is a seasoned water mage and a widow. But she is also a mother and a traveler. When she leaves her home, where it is safe, she ends up in the South Country and finds herself faced with things way more unsettling than any enemy.

Lightfoot’s novel stands out for a number of reasons. There is a perfect contrast between Nina’s strengths and her vulnerability. Early on in the story, she shows her skill and confidence by dispatching a would-be attacker with her sling. But later, we see her full of doubt about her future, her purpose, and her magical abilities. It makes her relatable on a human level to readers. One moment in particular that was memorable was when she attempted to summon water, but her power did not respond. This is something she has done many times before. So, this scene actually marks a turning point for her as a woman trying to get through life after loss. I also appreciated the fact that Nina was not at all painted as this perfect heroine. She had compassion and wisdom, but she also had her occasional flaws.

I love how the author reveals character through some very meaningful encounters. It did not matter if Nina was helping a desperate mother in poverty, sharing a story around a campfire, or reflecting on family memories. Each of her interactions deepens the world Lightfoot has created. While the action scenes were impactful, these softer moments were equally impactful, if not more. I appreciated the worldbuilding as well. It was immersive, but it never overwhelmed the story. For example, the South Country’s scrublands, the coastal ports, and the isolated settlements made me feel like I lived there. Throw in the characters with struggles and aspirations, and it adds the perfect texture to the whole narrative.

There were quite a few interesting characters besides Nina. Dalton, her brother, played an important role in moving the story along. He also has a role as a responsible steward and weather mage. This contrasts well with Nina’s wanderlust and impulsiveness. It’s through Dalton that readers learn so much about Nina’s family history as well as the Ruain culture. Then there is Tilda in Easthaven and Dalton’s romantic interest. She adds humor and warmth to the story. Her role is brief, but she helps connect the important threads of the story. Isobel is the struggling mom who suffers through poverty. She is devoted to her children, and her part of the story just makes it emotionally powerful. Other characters I found rather interesting included Willow, who is the wife of Legary. She is the town’s wisewoman, also. She bonds with Nina and serves as a friend and confidante. Legary is in Granger, and readers will soon find out who he is and why Nina traveled there to see him. He is a talented stonemason and adds humor to the story. Corlis is mysterious and not fully understood. Legary has his concerns about leaving Nina in his care. His character creates a mystery and adds anticipation to the narrative. I loved the wolf that becomes more than just an animal companion. Nina’s relationship with this creature actually creates some of the most atmospheric scenes in the book.

Some of my favorite scenes that stood out for me were seeing Nina and Willow work as healers. Nina accompanies Willow on her healing visits, and this adds another layer of richness to the worldbuilding. But this scene is not just about magic and healing. It also showcases community, caregiving, and the quieter ways that people help each other. Another scene that stood out was surrounding Corlis. When he is introduced, it creates the novel’s strongest suspenseful threads. I was just as uncertain and suspicious of Corlis as Legary was. The journey into the wilderness was another standout moment for me. This combined physical danger and emotional reflection. This journey also seems to test Nina’s resilience and forces her to think about who she is becoming.


At a Glance: A character-driven fantasy adventure about a widowed water mage whose journey through unfamiliar lands becomes a path toward renewal. The story blends magic, grief, healing, family ties, and atmospheric wilderness travel.

— Demetria Head, Reader Views 

5-Star Review

Reader Views 5-Star Review Award for The Karenina Chronicles by Deborah J. Lightfoot

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Adverse Reactions: “Equal Parts Western, Dystopian, and Paranormal”

Editorial Review by The Lit Credence

Some stories explore extraordinary powers. Others explore the cost of being different. Adverse Reactions successfully does both, delivering a gripping blend of paranormal suspense, dystopian fiction, and Weird West atmosphere while placing its emotional weight squarely on resilience, identity, and justice. Drawing on a haunting premise, Deborah J. Lightfoot crafts a world where psychokinetic abilities are treated as a crime, and fear is weaponized into persecution.

ADVERSE REACTIONS: A Novel of the Paranormal by Deborah J. Lightfoot

At the heart of the novel is Devin Perridin, a protagonist whose greatest battle isn’t simply against those who hunt her—it is against the psychological scars left by institutional cruelty. After surviving the horrific “treatments” of the Peaceful Hills sanatorium, Devin’s journey becomes one of reclaiming not only her abilities but also her sense of self. Her transformation from broken survivor to determined force of resistance gives the novel its strong emotional foundation.

Lightfoot also excels at creating a distinctive setting. The prairie landscapes, hidden ranches, outlaw figures, and lingering traces of Old Magic create an atmosphere that feels equal parts Western, dystopian, and paranormal without allowing any single genre to dominate. The cinematic descriptions make many scenes easy to visualize, while the steady tension keeps the narrative engaging throughout.

Beyond the action, the novel raises meaningful questions about prejudice, conformity, and the dangers of allowing fear to justify oppression. Rather than becoming overly preachy, these themes emerge naturally through Devin’s experiences and the morally complex characters surrounding her. Supporting characters such as Jack and Angelina provide warmth and balance, while others challenge Devin’s beliefs about revenge and justice, adding depth to the story.

While some readers may find the opening chapters slower as the world and Devin’s trauma are established, the pacing gains considerable momentum once the central conflict unfolds. From there, the novel delivers suspense, emotional growth, and satisfying character development that reward patient readers.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

This editorial review reflects the independent professional opinion
of The Lit Credence editorial team.

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Let’s Make a Movie!

Yes, please! Somebody really should make my novels into movies or miniseries. One of the first editors to ever lay eyes on my Waterspell fantasy saga called it cinematic. A later reader won my everlasting gratitude when he posted this review: “This is up there with the great books of wonder! Would love to see this as a movie. Have spent three days reading each book with hardly any sleep. It’s so enthralling that I would say I was bespelled by each word!” Wow! Thank you from the bottom of my heart. 😍

I agree about the movie. My Waterspell books have a dark, dangerous, mysterious leading man and a brave, headstrong, determined young woman protagonist. The story starts in an isolated manor house in a cursed forest. From there, the quest takes the two main characters across bandit-infested plains, high into snow-capped mountains, and then to the distant shore of another world. It would make a gripping miniseries or even a quartet of movies. There are four Waterspell books, so—logically—four movies.

My newest novel, the standalone Adverse Reactions, is a post-apocalyptic, paranormal, gritty modern Western fantasy. There’s plenty of danger and suspense, with the super-power element of psychokinesis (mental ability to move objects). The characters are complex, refusing to immediately reveal their motives. Are they friend, or are they foe?

The book’s settings will be familiar to filmmakers and moviegoers, but all have a twist. The town on the dusty prairie is called Purity, but it’s built on a river that carries an ominous name: Contagion. The so-called ranch is more of a commune for outcasts. The place has got cowboys, cattle, and horses, but the whole outfit hides deep in rugged mountains, far from town. In another remote part of those mountains, a pseudo-psychiatric facility is a true hellhole, a buried chamber of horrors.

A filmmaker could have a field day (or a franchise) with Adverse Reactions. The book has a Hunger Games vibe. Too bad I don’t know any directors or producers.

If you’ve got Hollywood connections, please drop a few strong hints. There’ll be a finder’s fee in it for you. 🤗

(This piece first appeared as a guest post at Bedazzled by Books.)

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New In Books: Interview with Deborah J. Lightfoot, Author of Adverse Reactions

by NewInBooks
in Author InterviewsFantasy & Science FictionNews
15 April 2026

What’s the story behind the story? What inspired you to write this book?

ADVERSE REACTIONS: A Novel of the Paranormal by Deborah J. Lightfoot

I don’t remember and can’t even guess where the original idea came from. I actually started the book in 2005, but managed only 24,000 words before hitting a wall. I got stuck at the first plot point. So I shoved the manuscript into a file cabinet and returned to writing the epic fantasy that eventually became my six-book Waterspell series. But I never forgot that partial manuscript. Last summer, I unearthed it and read what I’d written 20 years before. What I found in those rough-draft pages—the compelling urgency of it—surprised me.

The awful situation the protagonist is in, as the story opens, grabbed and held me. And more than that: my mind leapt ahead when I reached the first plot point. A score of years earlier, I hadn’t known where the story went from there. But now I did. The logical and dramatic next steps in the quest for justice were clear. During the book’s 20-year incubation, I’d done a lot of writing and a lot of living. I’d gained experience, deepened my understanding of people and their motivations, and observed the good and the evil of which humans are capable. All of that equipped me to finish the story, and to do it in a way that has been personally fulfilling.

Pick theme songs for the main characters of your book.
Adverse Reactions is a post-apocalyptic, paranormal, suspense-thriller, Western fantasy. It crosses genres! The Great Plains setting evokes the theme song from the movie, Once Upon a Time in the West. Another classic film score that would fit is The Good, the Bad and the Ugly.

What’s your favorite genre to read? Is it the same as your favorite genre to write?
I mainly read and write fantasy, with a fair amount of science fiction on the side. As a kid, the first book I bought with my own money was Daybreak—2250 A.D., post-apocalyptic science fiction by the great Andre Norton. I fell in love with Norton’s books and her writing style. Currently, I’m catching up on her Witch World fantasy novels that I somehow missed in my adolescence.

What books are on your TBR pile right now?
So many! Too many! Besides the Witch World books, which are numerous, I’m into the Sally Lockhart mysteries by Philip Pullman, published between 1985 and 1994. The final book of that series came out just a year before The Golden Compass. I recently listened to the audiobooks of The Book of Dust sequels, and as a fantasy writer I was interested in Pullman’s transition from mystery to fantasy. I’m enjoying the Sally Lockhart books, but honestly, I wouldn’t have thought they were written by the same man who would go on to write the incomparable His Dark Materials. Pullman made an inspired leap with Lyra Belacqua’s story, his masterpiece.

What scene in your book was your favorite to write?
I’d have to say it’s when my protagonist, Devin, meets Mike Sutter, a complicated man who is the definition of “morally gray.” Sometimes he’s kind and generous. Other times, he’s ruthless to the point of cruelty. He’s got his own agenda, as Devin soon discovers.

Do you have any quirky writing habits?
I sit down at the computer, and in strict and unvarying order, I arrange these:

  • Web browser, taskbar bottom-left, ready to look up synonyms and make sure a word really means what I think it means
  • Word processing program center-screen—plain old Word, nothing fancy
  • Dictionary, taskbar bottom-right, my trusty Merriam-Webster
  • On the writing desk nearby, a hardback copy of the Oxford Thesaurus (American Edition)

I cannot proceed without those things at my fingertips, and in that order. I also require a cup of coffee, a mug of water, and the hum of the air conditioner. Those will keep me pounding the keyboard for hours, until the coffee and water dictate a break. 😊

Do you have a motto, quote or philosophy you live by?

“The soul that has no fixed goal loses itself; for as they say, to be everywhere is to be nowhere.” —Michel de Montaigne

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A New Review for My New Book!

The first review is in for my latest, ADVERSE REACTIONS: A Novel of the Paranormal, and it’s a five-star gem! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ UK reader Alex Longbow shared this on Amazon:

ADVERSE REACTIONS: A Novel of the Paranormal by Deborah J. Lightfoot

5.0 out of 5 stars
Another brilliant book from Deborah J Lightfoot!
Reviewed in the United Kingdom on March 20, 2026
Format: Kindle
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Deborah J Lightfoot’s work is always a must read for me, and I have hugely enjoyed every one of her previous books. These have all taken place in her world of Ladhredin, a world that has become very real to me through the pages of her books. This new work, Adverse Reactions is a new departure for her, and an entirely new world is introduced to the reader. I was at once excited and intrigued by this, keen to see where Lightfoot would take me next. It’s fair to say that the world she creates is very different to Ladhredin, with magic playing no explicit part. Instead, paranormal ability takes the place of magic and lies at the core of the book. World building is skilfully managed, with the history, the land and the people introduced on a ‘need to know’ basis, so that the world is brought to us incrementally as the pages turn. I found this to be a very satisfying approach, and one which certainly engaged my interest throughout.

Our main protagonist, Devin, is herself in a process of self-discovery, which proceeds alongside this gradual revelation of the world she lives in. I found her story to be fascinating, her discovery of her own abilities and the revelation of her life history most engaging. In order to discover her true self she negotiates a precarious and engrossing path amongst characters who will variously support or challenge her as the story progresses. Devin has suffered terrible injustices and the manner in which she addresses these through the use of her developing paranormal powers is highly satisfying to the reader.

There is an exceptionally strong cast of characters in Adverse Reactions. The wholesome purity of some key relationships is balanced by Devin’s dealings with some very complex individuals, ones whom the reader is kept wondering whether they truly represent enemy or ally. In summary, Adverse Reactions is a thoroughly engrossing read, that offers some hints that there may be more to come from this context. I hope there is!

Thank you so much, Alex! 💙 I’m enormously grateful for your kind words and fabulous review. 🎉

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To Learn More

Pre-publication reviews are excerpted here:
New Release: ADVERSE REACTIONS
A Bookish Striptease: Cover Reveal
ADVERSE REACTIONS: “Immediately immersive and thematically rich”
My Goodreads “Review” of ADVERSE REACTIONS
Book Launch To-Do List

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A Bookish Striptease: Cover Reveal

Now that I have a cover for my new book, I can do a cover reveal. 😎 Which will have to be on Bookstagram and here on my scattershot little blog since everybody in my personal Facebook world has already seen the whole cover uncovered, along with every draft of the surprisingly difficult process (beginning unsatisfactorily with one designer and ending, much more happily, at a completely different studio) that led to a usable image. Long ago, I learned a maxim, and life continues to prove its truth: Things take longer than they do.

Do you find these teasers intriguing? I would really love for people to read this book. Adverse Reactions is the only true standalone novel I’ve ever written. It began life in 2005 with a 24,000-word partial manuscript that stayed in a file cabinet for 20 years. But the story never let go of me, and finally I’d lived enough life and learned enough craft and gained enough understanding of people to finish what I’d started.

*The short blurb:

In the town of Purity, mental gifts earn you a bullet or a lingering death by mind-torture. Devin Perridin is the Syke who survived the horrors of the psych ward. Now the “One Who Got Away” is back for a reckoning. To defeat her tormentors, Devin must reclaim her shattered mind, aided by a denim-clad desperado and a generous helping of Old Magic. Survival was just the beginning: vengeance is next.

*The back cover copy:

In the remote prairie town of Purity, there are some who possess extraordinary powers of the mind. Their fate, if they are discovered, is death by a bullet to the brain. The wealthy, however, have an alternative way to die: they may submit to “therapy”—torture—at the Peaceful Hills sanatorium. For most of the inmates, it is a worse death than a sniper’s bullet. The asylum is brutally designed to snuff out every spark of psychokinetic power, turning a Syke’s brain to mush. Few inmates survive.

Devin Perridin does. She’s the One Who Got Away. But can she find her way back into her right mind? And bring a long-overdue reckoning to the town of Purity and its house of horrors? To exact vengeance on those who put her in the asylum, and avenge the murders of her fellow Sykes, Devin will need the aid of a denim-clad desperado—and a generous helping of Old Magic.

Release date: March 18

*From a professional evaluation: “Its accessible style of prose and teenaged protagonist would likely endear it to young adults, whereas its mature themes and technical accomplishments would likely go a long way with older readers. Because of the book’s literary merit it could definitely attract readers who would not normally consider themselves ‘genre readers.'” —The Black List on the subject of the book’s “Prospects”

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ADVERSE REACTIONS: “Immediately immersive and thematically rich”

Today I received some personal good news that I NEEDED! An evaluation score of 8 from an industry professional at The Black List! 🎉

To explain my thrillment, I must first explain The Black List. It’s a “prominent online platform where screenwriters, playwrights, and novelists connect with film, TV, and publishing industry professionals, allowing writers to host scripts/manuscripts, get feedback from vetted readers, and gain exposure to agents, managers, and producers, originally stemming from an annual survey of best unproduced screenplays and now a major hub for discovering new talent and projects. It helps writers get their work seen by industry insiders, offering services like professional evaluations.”

I requested an evaluation of my latest novel, the not-yet-published ADVERSE REACTIONS, and got a glowing response. “Congratulations on your recent evaluation by our reader,” said the email. “Fewer than 5% of the projects hosted on the site have received an overall score of 8 or above.”

The publishing industry professional who reviewed my book gave it an overall score of 8 (out of 10) and posted this:

Strengths

“This novel is immediately immersive, with an opening scene that sucks readers in with vivid sensory detail and a great sense of suspense. In fact, the sensory detail of the book’s prose is one of its strongest qualities … Adverse Reactions is also thematically rich, as Devin faces constant self-doubt but comes to find empowerment in the unique abilities that have made her an outcast. In some ways, the book feels like an extended metaphor about how mental illness is treated in today’s world and what it means to embrace one’s neurodivergence. There is also compelling thematic commentary on modern psychiatric practices and treatment methods, with the author skillfully exploring the negative consequences of supposedly ‘getting well.’ … This novel has few weaknesses.”

Wow! THAT is the sort of reaction that restores my faith in … well, in myself. I have agonized over this book. I started it in 2005; wrote a rough 24,000 words, then shelved it for 20 years; finally “finished” it in 2026.

Now I wait to see if any publisher or filmmaker shows interest in the book. The Black List is sending my work out for additional evaluations, and if the overall score remains at 8 or above, the book will get featured (top-listed) where more industry pros will see it. I’m not getting my hopes up, but this validation of my writing was a great thing to come home to, on the heels of my grocery run this morning. 😍

Prospects

The professional reader’s evaluation closed with an analysis of the book’s prospects. I’m both excited and frustrated by the evaluator’s conclusion:

Adverse Reactions would likely perform quite well among adults and young adults alike. Its accessible style of prose and teenaged protagonist would likely endear it to younger readers, whereas its mature themes and technical accomplishments would likely go a long way with older readers. It would certainly make sense to at least start by marketing the book to pre-existing fans of supernatural/fantasy books, perhaps at special conferences or bookstores that cater to these genres; however, because of the book’s literary merit it could definitely attract readers who would not normally consider themselves ‘genre readers.’ For this reason, it would be important to make sure the book receives coverage from reputable book-related publications and/or prominent figures in the literary community.”

Well, OK. I can certainly market the book to pre-existing fans of supernatural/fantasy books, most especially the loyal readers of my Waterspell series. If I self-publish, I might be able to get it into bookstores and possibly hand-sell it at conventions and the like. But how in the world do I get coverage from reputable book-related publications or prominent figures in the literary community? If I had those kinds of insider connections, I’d be enjoying a great deal more financial success in my writing career. It goes back to who you know, and I don’t know many people. I’m an introvert and a bit of recluse. <sigh>

But all of that aside, I’m absolutely delighted to get an enthusiastic evaluation from a publishing industry professional. I long ago gave up submitting my work to agents and editors, who take forever to respond, if they deign to respond at all. The Black List removes the tedium of old-fashioned manuscript submission. Their roster of professional readers will respond in one week, or within three weeks at the latest. It’s not free, nor especially cheap. Evaluations cost $150. But Guild members (Writers Guild of America or The Authors Guild) get a substantial discount. I’ve belonged to The Authors Guild since 1995, and thus I paid $120 for the pro evaluation. And because it scored an 8, The Black List is giving me two additional reviews for free! That’s a pretty great deal. 😍

The Black List

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When AI Describes Your Book Better Than You Do

A recent email informed me that somebody who reviewed my Waterspell boxed set at NetGalley had updated their review, more than a year later. Curious to see what had changed, I Googled “NetGalley Waterspell books,” thinking that would be the quickest way to find a web page that I had not looked at in more than a year.

What came up, to my fascinated delight, was a lengthy Google AI Overview of my little publishing empire. I copy-pasted the overview, wanting to save it and, frankly, learn from it. As much as I detest all AI-generated books (a novel should be written by a human, and ONLY by a human), there’s no denying that AI can often do a better job than the author, when it comes to summarizing a book.

For a writer, no question holds more terror the inevitable, “What’s your book about?” We are too close to our own work. We know the nuances. We know that a book is “about” a lot of things. There are subplots, themes, side-quests. Knowing what we know, it’s very difficult for most of us to give a succinct response to the “What’s it about?” question.

Therefore, when AI offers me its take on the matter, for free, I won’t turn up my nose at the help. Here’s how Google’s AI Overview responded to my rather lazy “NetGalley Waterspell books” search query:

“Highlighting the series’ immersive quality and addictive nature”

NetGalley hosts digital review copies for Waterspell, an immersive, cross-genre fantasy series by Deborah J. Lightfoot, featuring the core quartet (The Warlock, The Wysard, The Wisewoman, The Witch) and sequels like The Karenina Chronicles, praised by reviewers for its world-building, characters, magic, and romance. The series is designed to be read in order, following a continuous story, and offers boxed sets for convenience on platforms like NetGalley for reviewers.

Key Aspects of the Waterspell Series:

  • Genre: Epic Fantasy with elements of mystery, adventure, slow-burn romance, and dystopian undertones.
  • Story: A multi-generational saga focusing on family, magic, self-discovery, and overcoming danger in a richly detailed world. (Italics added by me. I like this.)
  • Characters: Compelling, complex, and morally gray characters, with main protagonists Carin and Verek central to the original quartet.
  • Structure: Originally a trilogy, it expanded to a four-book series (Books 1-4) and continues with linked sequels.
  • Readability: Intended to be read in order as one continuous story, though the sequels offer deeper dives into new characters like Nina.

How it Relates to NetGalley:

  • Review Copies: Publishers (like the one for Waterspell) use NetGalley to offer free digital advance reader copies (ARCs) to book reviewers, bloggers, and industry professionals to generate early buzz.
  • Reviewer Feedback: NetGalley hosts reviews from readers who have received these copies, with comments highlighting the series’ immersive quality and addictive nature.

Where to Find It:

  • Official Site: waterspell.net for author info, series details, and sales.
  • Retailers: Available as ebooks, audiobooks, and print on major platforms (Amazon, Apple Books, Kobo, etc.).
  • Boxed Sets: Convenient bundles for the first four books are available, often through books2read.com/WaterspellBoxedSet.  

Thank You Kindly!

My original reason for googling “NetGalley Waterspell books” fell by the wayside — I did not find out what “updates” the reviewer had made, more than a year after the fact. But never mind that: I got something useful out of the search. Thanks, AI summarizer!

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Are You an Ideal Reader?

I recently attended a webinar on “How & Where to Find Your Readers,” presented to Authors Guild members by Andrea Guevara of Author Brand Strength. Participants were tasked with creating a profile of their Ideal Reader.

I drew a blank. Every novel I’ve written, I wrote for myself. For my four early books of nonfiction, I had my target audiences firmly in mind. I knew what kind of reader each book might appeal to.

But when I gave myself permission to write what I really wanted to write—fantasy—I wrote solely for myself. The books reflect my interests, my influences and motivations, and my literary tastes.

My Ideal Readers

As I continued to ponder the question of “Who is my ideal reader?” my thoughts turned to some of the astonishingly insightful reviews that readers have given my novels. The readers who truly get it, who understand my characters, their flaws, emotions and relationships, are not easily labeled or categorized. They do not fall neatly into standard groups such as “fantasy readers,” “romance readers,” or fans of dystopian fiction.

In an effort to discover what my best readers have in common, I’ve created brief profiles for six who gave my books outstanding reviews:

1. Feifei Le (Lady Vigilante) of Austin, Texas, was among my earliest readers and most enthusiastic reviewers. Her Goodreads profile lists her favorite books as: “Any book as long as there’s romance in it, but I do gravitate towards dark romance and romantic suspense. I will occasionally read a YA paranormal/fantasy book that tickles my fancy.”

2. Ariel The Tempest of Greece describes herself as “an avid reader with a strong passion for engaging storytelling, particularly in the genres of fantasy, romance, science fiction, novellas, short stories, YA, and new adult fiction.” She recently posted glowing reviews of my Waterspell novels (links below).

3. Nancy M. Heinzel of California is an eclectic mystery. This reader is a frequent reviewer, on Amazon, of everything from horror and thrillers to literary fiction and turkey-hunting stories. I do detect a preference, perhaps, for dystopian fantasy among the many reviews showing on their Amazon profile.

4. Dalton S., a reviewer at NetGalley, is a great reviewer but stingy with stars. After declaring that “Waterspell (Books 1-4) is a must-read for fantasy enthusiasts who enjoy immersive world-building, well-developed characters, and a storyline that seamlessly blends magic and human emotion” (hooray!), he gave the boxed set only three stars (boo-hoo).

5. Unlike Dalton at NetGalley, Robin at Audible is a generous reviewer. She gives five stars to pretty much everything she listens to. Her tastes seem to range from self-help and memoir, to thrillers and fantasy.

6. Malibu Moon (of California, I’m guessing) reads Apple Books, not Amazon. I know nothing of this person but love her for writing a rare Apple review (Apple customers are not as prone to reviewing as are readers on Kindle): “Thank you for writing this wonderfully imaginative series. I loved every minute of it!!!” And I love you, my dear.

What Have I Learned?

What am I to make of this sampling? I have readers in California and Texas, and also Oregon, Wisconsin, Oklahoma, and New Mexico that I know of. I assume I have readers in other states as well. (Comment below, please, if you’re among them!) Beyond the U.S., I know I have readers in Canada, Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand, and Germany, and I recently saw sales in Japan.

What do these readers want, besides good writing? Many of them gravitate toward fantasy, but then there’s Lynda Key, who wrote on Amazon: “I rarely read fantasy anymore preferring historical fiction of the Roman kind. The last fantasy I read that was memorable was by Tolkien. That was until I found the first Waterspell book in my large ‘to be read’ pile.” Lynda gave the series five stars and says: “I couldn’t help myself. I kept buying and immediately reading each consecutive book.”

An ideal reader, indeed!

After spending three hours trying to profile my ideal readers, I’m no wiser than I was. They’re all over the place, not only geographically but in their reading habits.

At this point in my writing life (I’ve been publishing under my Deborah J. Lightfoot byline since my first newspaper story was printed in 1977) I believe there’s only one thing to do:

I’ll keep writing for myself. I’ll write the kinds of books I want to read.

One actionable thing I did get from the “Find Your Readers” webinar, however, was a reminder to research comp titles. I’d undoubtedly do a better job of describing my books, and thus reaching more of my ideal readers, if I had a better grasp of the currently popular books that are somewhat comparable to mine.

Like every writer, though (well, those writers who pride themselves on not “writing to a trend” or writing “more of the same, just different”), I do like to think that my series is unique and not easily lumped in with other books in the fantasy genre. That’s what I like to think, anyway.

Ariel The Tempest’s Reviews

Now for the links to Ariel The Tempest’s recent reviews of my books on Goodreads. She made my YEAR with her kind, understanding, well-thought-out words. If you’re on Goodreads, please give these reviews a Like to help boost their visibility:

Waterspell Book 1: The Warlock
Waterspell Book 2: The Wysard
Waterspell Book 3: The Wisewoman
Waterspell Book 4: The Witch
The Karenina Chronicles: A Waterspell Novel

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Books 1-4 on NetGalley: November 2023

Available on NetGalley until December 1.

When the boxed set of Waterspell Books 1–4 came out in April 2022, I offered ARCs on NetGalley. Optimistically, I hoped for 40 or 50 reviews.

I got six.

Those six, however, were all highly positive. There’s also a chance that some of the readers who downloaded the ARC did eventually post a review somewhere else. At the very least, as I noted in my observations back then, I gained exposure in a much larger arena than Bookstagram and Facebook, and got my work in front of all sorts of industry professionals, including booksellers and librarians.

The Karenina Chronicles by Deborah J. LightfootWith the new book, The Karenina Chronicles, coming out soon (paperback November 17, ebook December 1), I decided to offer the original quartet on NetGalley once more. Of course I revised the epub file to include a teaser for the new book:

Continue the family saga! Follow the further adventures of eldest daughter Nina in The Karenina Chronicles.

In the first couple of days of the boxed set’s new availability on NetGalley, I’ve received 30 requests. I’ve denied a few of those, in cases where the requester seemed to have no interest in the fantasy genre, or showed a tendency to DNF books. I figured they wouldn’t likely read a boxed set of 1,200 pages in a genre they didn’t especially like. Mostly, however, I have accepted all comers. As somebody once said: For most writers, piracy isn’t the problem. Obscurity is the problem. With the wider distribution that NetGalley makes possible, I’m trying to become a little less obscure.

Once again, I’m using the Victory Editing NetGalley Co-op, which enables me to “rent” a slot on NetGalley for one month for $50. Pretty cheap way to get reviews and exposure.

The Blessed Six

Fingers crossed that my return to NetGalley will bring in some additional reviews, to build on the strong foundation that my initial experiment produced. Looking back through those six lovely reviews, I must share excerpts:

“In this four-book saga, the author has created an epic fantasy world full of magic, danger, romance, and travel through time and space. This is a most enjoyable read for fans of fantasy and fine writing.” —Shirley

“A good choice for those that like fantasy. This has rich character and world building, and the elements of a good fantasy story.” —Paul

“An entertaining, fast paced, and well plotted fantasy series. Riveting. The world building is fascinating, and the characters fleshed out. Highly recommended.” —Librarian

“An addictive-to-read epic fantasy with drama and adventure. I binged through the books, eager to see how the story unfolds.” —Reviewer

“An extraordinary book, 4 in fact! I read these over a five-day period and found the storytelling fantastic.” —Reviewer

“A riveting series. Well written, excellent world-building with an engaging plot in each book and well developed characters. I was gripped right from the start with twists I didn’t see and unpredictability.” —Aria

Thank you all! 💙 🎉 Here’s hoping that my return to NetGalley will meet with as much success as my first time out, and maybe more.

If you’re a NetGalley member and would like a free copy of Waterspell, please snag it before the title is archived on December 1. The link: https://www.netgalley.com/catalog/book/306678

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