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The Karenina Chronicles: “An Unforgettable Heroine and a Rich World of Characters”

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Reviewed by Demetria Head for Reader Views 

The Karenina Chronicles is book five in the Waterspell series but can easily be read as a standalone tale. This is a fantasy adventure that covers not just expansive worldbuilding, but also personal losses and healing. The story takes place in the Waterspell universe. Readers get to follow Lady Karenina of Ruain. After her husband passes, she takes a journey to an unfamiliar place. It starts as just an attempt to outrun grief, but it becomes her way to find her identity and purpose.

The Karenina Chronicles: A Waterspell Novel by Deborah J. Lightfoot

As the story begins, Nina has spent a great deal of her life wielding immense power, but now she questions everything. She teases her younger brother Dalton while they are aboard a ship on the waters of Ladrehdin. She is a seasoned water mage and a widow. But she is also a mother and a traveler. When she leaves her home, where it is safe, she ends up in the South Country and finds herself faced with things way more unsettling than any enemy.

Lightfoot’s novel stands out for a number of reasons. There is a perfect contrast between Nina’s strengths and her vulnerability. Early on in the story, she shows her skill and confidence by dispatching a would-be attacker with her sling. But later, we see her full of doubt about her future, her purpose, and her magical abilities. It makes her relatable on a human level to readers. One moment in particular that was memorable was when she attempted to summon water, but her power did not respond. This is something she has done many times before. So, this scene actually marks a turning point for her as a woman trying to get through life after loss. I also appreciated the fact that Nina was not at all painted as this perfect heroine. She had compassion and wisdom, but she also had her occasional flaws.

I love how the author reveals character through some very meaningful encounters. It did not matter if Nina was helping a desperate mother in poverty, sharing a story around a campfire, or reflecting on family memories. Each of her interactions deepens the world Lightfoot has created. While the action scenes were impactful, these softer moments were equally impactful, if not more. I appreciated the worldbuilding as well. It was immersive, but it never overwhelmed the story. For example, the South Country’s scrublands, the coastal ports, and the isolated settlements made me feel like I lived there. Throw in the characters with struggles and aspirations, and it adds the perfect texture to the whole narrative.

There were quite a few interesting characters besides Nina. Dalton, her brother, played an important role in moving the story along. He also has a role as a responsible steward and weather mage. This contrasts well with Nina’s wanderlust and impulsiveness. It’s through Dalton that readers learn so much about Nina’s family history as well as the Ruain culture. Then there is Tilda in Easthaven and Dalton’s romantic interest. She adds humor and warmth to the story. Her role is brief, but she helps connect the important threads of the story. Isobel is the struggling mom who suffers through poverty. She is devoted to her children, and her part of the story just makes it emotionally powerful. Other characters I found rather interesting included Willow, who is the wife of Legary. She is the town’s wisewoman, also. She bonds with Nina and serves as a friend and confidante. Legary is in Granger, and readers will soon find out who he is and why Nina traveled there to see him. He is a talented stonemason and adds humor to the story. Corlis is mysterious and not fully understood. Legary has his concerns about leaving Nina in his care. His character creates a mystery and adds anticipation to the narrative. I loved the wolf that becomes more than just an animal companion. Nina’s relationship with this creature actually creates some of the most atmospheric scenes in the book.

Some of my favorite scenes that stood out for me were seeing Nina and Willow work as healers. Nina accompanies Willow on her healing visits, and this adds another layer of richness to the worldbuilding. But this scene is not just about magic and healing. It also showcases community, caregiving, and the quieter ways that people help each other. Another scene that stood out was surrounding Corlis. When he is introduced, it creates the novel’s strongest suspenseful threads. I was just as uncertain and suspicious of Corlis as Legary was. The journey into the wilderness was another standout moment for me. This combined physical danger and emotional reflection. This journey also seems to test Nina’s resilience and forces her to think about who she is becoming.


At a Glance: A character-driven fantasy adventure about a widowed water mage whose journey through unfamiliar lands becomes a path toward renewal. The story blends magic, grief, healing, family ties, and atmospheric wilderness travel.

— Demetria Head, Reader Views 

5-Star Review

Reader Views 5-Star Review Award for The Karenina Chronicles by Deborah J. Lightfoot

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Adverse Reactions: “Equal Parts Western, Dystopian, and Paranormal”

Editorial Review by The Lit Credence

Some stories explore extraordinary powers. Others explore the cost of being different. Adverse Reactions successfully does both, delivering a gripping blend of paranormal suspense, dystopian fiction, and Weird West atmosphere while placing its emotional weight squarely on resilience, identity, and justice. Drawing on a haunting premise, Deborah J. Lightfoot crafts a world where psychokinetic abilities are treated as a crime, and fear is weaponized into persecution.

ADVERSE REACTIONS: A Novel of the Paranormal by Deborah J. Lightfoot

At the heart of the novel is Devin Perridin, a protagonist whose greatest battle isn’t simply against those who hunt her—it is against the psychological scars left by institutional cruelty. After surviving the horrific “treatments” of the Peaceful Hills sanatorium, Devin’s journey becomes one of reclaiming not only her abilities but also her sense of self. Her transformation from broken survivor to determined force of resistance gives the novel its strong emotional foundation.

Lightfoot also excels at creating a distinctive setting. The prairie landscapes, hidden ranches, outlaw figures, and lingering traces of Old Magic create an atmosphere that feels equal parts Western, dystopian, and paranormal without allowing any single genre to dominate. The cinematic descriptions make many scenes easy to visualize, while the steady tension keeps the narrative engaging throughout.

Beyond the action, the novel raises meaningful questions about prejudice, conformity, and the dangers of allowing fear to justify oppression. Rather than becoming overly preachy, these themes emerge naturally through Devin’s experiences and the morally complex characters surrounding her. Supporting characters such as Jack and Angelina provide warmth and balance, while others challenge Devin’s beliefs about revenge and justice, adding depth to the story.

While some readers may find the opening chapters slower as the world and Devin’s trauma are established, the pacing gains considerable momentum once the central conflict unfolds. From there, the novel delivers suspense, emotional growth, and satisfying character development that reward patient readers.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

This editorial review reflects the independent professional opinion
of The Lit Credence editorial team.

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Affordable Legitimate Book Promotion: Written Word Media vs Book Cave

I try to place at least one promotion per month in a newsletter or email such as Book Barbarian, Fussy Librarian, Robin Reads, or the Freebooksy or Bargain Booksy options at Written Word Media. As a service to my fellow and sister authors, I make an annual report on the results. (Details here, with clickable links to the various book-promo sites that I’ve used.)

On April 8, 2026, I ran a series promotion with Written Word Media, at a cost of $170. As shown in the graphic, that promo resulted in 601 book orders for my Waterspell series at Amazon, the majority of those (469) coming on the actual day (a Wednesday) of the “one-day” promotion. But experience has taught me that many people don’t open their emails until a day or two after the promo runs. The five-day cumulative numbers give a truer picture of the promo’s relative success. After the initial first-day flurry, another 132 orders were placed over the next four days, bringing the five-day grand total to 601.

Book promotion sites: Written Word Media vs. Book Cave

Then I ran a full-series promotion (for the six books of Waterspell) at Book Cave, a place I have only recently discovered. Unlike Written Word Media, which offers one-day full-series promotions, you can schedule a multi-day promo at Book Cave at no extra cost for the extra days. My series promo ran from May 30 through June 7. And though it cost only $71, it delivered results very comparable to what Written Word Media had brought in: 577 total orders at Amazon, the majority of them (469 again, seemingly the magic number) coming on May 30–31 (Saturday–Sunday) and the rest (108) trickling in toward the tail-end of the promo period. For epic fantasy with a series add-on, Book Cave charges a cool $99 less than Written Word Media does. See the Cave’s price list here.

Granted, this is only my first experience with Book Cave. I’ve been running full-series promos at Written Word Media for several years, and it’s quite possible that their subscribers have seen my books featured so many times, they scroll past and look for newer titles. But to save $99, I will definitely choose the $71 promo at Book Cave the next time I want to promote my entire six-book series at one time in one place.

For those wanting to dig into this topic in greater detail, I’ll refer you to my earlier posts on my book promo efforts. From these reports, you’ll learn what promo sites I’ve used, and how successful (or not) they have been, at a cost of $45 to $65 at most of the sites I have tried:

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Author Websites by BookBub

A complete makeover of my author website has been on my To-Do list for years. I’m well aware that this site (which you have somehow found, gentle reader, if you’re reading this post — thank you!) looks quite dated. Its dimensions are geared toward the smaller desktop screens of yesteryear, and it is NOT optimized for phones and tablets. And the content: Oh my! “What a tangled web we weave!” This site has become a catch-all scrapbook of my bookish enterprises. I have added pages and interlinked them until the whole thing borders on labyrinthian.

I am held back, however, from attempting to change the theme of this WordPress site because I dread the possibility of catastrophically scrambling the whole messy thing. When I read advice about “staging sites” and code snippets, my blood runs cold.

Simply starting over with a new site is probably easier than attempting to update this existing monster. I have made a small start in that direction by accepting BookBub’s offer of a free “Author Pages” website. I won’t pay $10 a month for their “pro” version, but so far their free plan is giving me everything I need:

  • Author Bio
  • Books — descriptions and buy links
  • Social Media links
  • Blog
  • Updates (an example is shown here)
  • Reviews (what they call Praise)
  • Contact page
  • Other Writing — a page for linking to my essays, articles, short stories, etc.

The content that is only available with a Pro plan is nothing that I would consider essential:

  • Events (those could be listed in the Updates section)
  • FAQs (nice to have as a separate page, but the info could be included on the Contact page in its optional “Personal message” section)
  • Media Coverage (could go under Reviews, or in the Blog or the Updates)
  • Press Kit (“Other Writing,” maybe, or worked into the Author Bio)
  • Custom Pages (yikes! Being able to add any number of pages to a website is what led to my current monster in the first place. Having a finite set of pages is more appealing to me.)

I don’t even mind the default address: deborahjlightfoot.author-pages.com. The “author-pages.com” extension is appropriate, and it looks a heck of a lot better than the “ag-sites.net” which is the default for websites hosted by the Authors Guild.

For now, therefore, I plan to slowly expand my free Author Pages site, courtesy of BookBub. Considering how much money I’ve spent with them over the years, running BookBub ads that always have a negative ROI, I figure they owe me a free basic website. Their strategy, I imagine, will turn out to be bait-and-switch: after enough authors have invested enough time and effort in developing their free sites, BookBub will probably discontinue the free plan and try to force everyone to pay $10 a month for the Pro version.

Sorry if that sounds cynical, but there is a vast industry dedicated to separating writers from their money. “Free” generally comes with massive strings attached.

If you have set up a website through BookBub — either Free or Pro — I would love to hear your thoughts. And if you have advice on how to update this aged, bloated website (the site you’re looking at right now) without breaking the thing, please get in touch! I need the help and some hand-holding through the perilous process.

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A Riveting Listen: The Waterspell Audiobook

"My daughter and I are enjoying these great audiobooks on our cross-country drive. I love the narrator! He really brings the words to life." (From a review of WATERSPELL: Boxed Set, Books 1-4 by Deborah J. Lightfoot, narrated by Simon de Deney.

Writers tend to get laser-focused on their latest release, but a solid backlist deserves love, too! I’m super proud of the four-book audio production of my Waterspell fantasy quartet. Narrator Simon de Deney did a masterful job. As this listener notes (see the picture): “He really brings the words to life.” And his ability to voice female as well as male characters is remarkable. Simon embodies the brooding warlock but he also delivers a totally believable young woman who is all bravado on the outside but terrified on the inside. Bravo! 🎉

If you’re planning a road trip this summer — or maybe a staycation, given the current (2026) price of fuel — give this 51-hour epic a listen. It’ll keep you engaged.

📢 1 credit at Audible for all four books.

Also available at other audio retailers with prices starting at $16.95.

WATERSPELL audiobook by Deborah J. Lightfoot, narrated by Simon de Deney. 51 hours of audio. Four books. 1 credit at Audible. Reviewers say: "Fantastic storytelling." "A voice that immerses you in a fantasy world both foreign and familiar. You won't want to leave." "Addictive epic fantasy. 
Five stars."

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Let’s Make a Movie!

Yes, please! Somebody really should make my novels into movies or miniseries. One of the first editors to ever lay eyes on my Waterspell fantasy saga called it cinematic. A later reader won my everlasting gratitude when he posted this review: “This is up there with the great books of wonder! Would love to see this as a movie. Have spent three days reading each book with hardly any sleep. It’s so enthralling that I would say I was bespelled by each word!” Wow! Thank you from the bottom of my heart. 😍

I agree about the movie. My Waterspell books have a dark, dangerous, mysterious leading man and a brave, headstrong, determined young woman protagonist. The story starts in an isolated manor house in a cursed forest. From there, the quest takes the two main characters across bandit-infested plains, high into snow-capped mountains, and then to the distant shore of another world. It would make a gripping miniseries or even a quartet of movies. There are four Waterspell books, so—logically—four movies.

My newest novel, the standalone Adverse Reactions, is a post-apocalyptic, paranormal, gritty modern Western fantasy. There’s plenty of danger and suspense, with the super-power element of psychokinesis (mental ability to move objects). The characters are complex, refusing to immediately reveal their motives. Are they friend, or are they foe?

The book’s settings will be familiar to filmmakers and moviegoers, but all have a twist. The town on the dusty prairie is called Purity, but it’s built on a river that carries an ominous name: Contagion. The so-called ranch is more of a commune for outcasts. The place has got cowboys, cattle, and horses, but the whole outfit hides deep in rugged mountains, far from town. In another remote part of those mountains, a pseudo-psychiatric facility is a true hellhole, a buried chamber of horrors.

A filmmaker could have a field day (or a franchise) with Adverse Reactions. The book has a Hunger Games vibe. Too bad I don’t know any directors or producers.

If you’ve got Hollywood connections, please drop a few strong hints. There’ll be a finder’s fee in it for you. 🤗

(This piece first appeared as a guest post at Bedazzled by Books.)

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New In Books: Interview with Deborah J. Lightfoot, Author of Adverse Reactions

by NewInBooks
in Author InterviewsFantasy & Science FictionNews
15 April 2026

What’s the story behind the story? What inspired you to write this book?

ADVERSE REACTIONS: A Novel of the Paranormal by Deborah J. Lightfoot

I don’t remember and can’t even guess where the original idea came from. I actually started the book in 2005, but managed only 24,000 words before hitting a wall. I got stuck at the first plot point. So I shoved the manuscript into a file cabinet and returned to writing the epic fantasy that eventually became my six-book Waterspell series. But I never forgot that partial manuscript. Last summer, I unearthed it and read what I’d written 20 years before. What I found in those rough-draft pages—the compelling urgency of it—surprised me.

The awful situation the protagonist is in, as the story opens, grabbed and held me. And more than that: my mind leapt ahead when I reached the first plot point. A score of years earlier, I hadn’t known where the story went from there. But now I did. The logical and dramatic next steps in the quest for justice were clear. During the book’s 20-year incubation, I’d done a lot of writing and a lot of living. I’d gained experience, deepened my understanding of people and their motivations, and observed the good and the evil of which humans are capable. All of that equipped me to finish the story, and to do it in a way that has been personally fulfilling.

Pick theme songs for the main characters of your book.
Adverse Reactions is a post-apocalyptic, paranormal, suspense-thriller, Western fantasy. It crosses genres! The Great Plains setting evokes the theme song from the movie, Once Upon a Time in the West. Another classic film score that would fit is The Good, the Bad and the Ugly.

What’s your favorite genre to read? Is it the same as your favorite genre to write?
I mainly read and write fantasy, with a fair amount of science fiction on the side. As a kid, the first book I bought with my own money was Daybreak—2250 A.D., post-apocalyptic science fiction by the great Andre Norton. I fell in love with Norton’s books and her writing style. Currently, I’m catching up on her Witch World fantasy novels that I somehow missed in my adolescence.

What books are on your TBR pile right now?
So many! Too many! Besides the Witch World books, which are numerous, I’m into the Sally Lockhart mysteries by Philip Pullman, published between 1985 and 1994. The final book of that series came out just a year before The Golden Compass. I recently listened to the audiobooks of The Book of Dust sequels, and as a fantasy writer I was interested in Pullman’s transition from mystery to fantasy. I’m enjoying the Sally Lockhart books, but honestly, I wouldn’t have thought they were written by the same man who would go on to write the incomparable His Dark Materials. Pullman made an inspired leap with Lyra Belacqua’s story, his masterpiece.

What scene in your book was your favorite to write?
I’d have to say it’s when my protagonist, Devin, meets Mike Sutter, a complicated man who is the definition of “morally gray.” Sometimes he’s kind and generous. Other times, he’s ruthless to the point of cruelty. He’s got his own agenda, as Devin soon discovers.

Do you have any quirky writing habits?
I sit down at the computer, and in strict and unvarying order, I arrange these:

  • Web browser, taskbar bottom-left, ready to look up synonyms and make sure a word really means what I think it means
  • Word processing program center-screen—plain old Word, nothing fancy
  • Dictionary, taskbar bottom-right, my trusty Merriam-Webster
  • On the writing desk nearby, a hardback copy of the Oxford Thesaurus (American Edition)

I cannot proceed without those things at my fingertips, and in that order. I also require a cup of coffee, a mug of water, and the hum of the air conditioner. Those will keep me pounding the keyboard for hours, until the coffee and water dictate a break. 😊

Do you have a motto, quote or philosophy you live by?

“The soul that has no fixed goal loses itself; for as they say, to be everywhere is to be nowhere.” —Michel de Montaigne

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Amazon A-Plus Content for Authors

Authors, have you added A+ Content to your book pages at Amazon?

When Amazon first introduced that feature, I didn’t do it because I thought it made my book pages look junky. But recently I read a newsletter article, The Amazon A10 Update: 3 Things Every Indie Author Needs to Know, by Ferol Vernon at Written Word Media. Among the topics discussed, “Why A+ content and dwell time are suddenly critical ranking factors” caught my attention.

To quote from the raw transcript of the podcast (with some editorial cleanup for readability):

Long, eh, Ferol? I like long. 😃

Enthused, I went to KDP and clicked on the Marketing tab, and then on “Manage A+ Content.” My enthusiasm grew when I saw all of the new layouts (what Amazon calls “modules”). Many of the new templates are well suited to my books and to my temperament. I chose three different modules to present A-plus content on my book pages. In them, I included review excerpts along with cover images and brief descriptions. Below are screenshots of each module. (In real life, the A-plus content looks sharper on the actual book pages at Amazon. These screenshots are a tad fuzzy. Clicking on each image will take you to the actual book page, where you can scroll down to see what shoppers see.)

Adverse Reactions: A Novel of the Paranormal

ADVERSE REACTIONS: A Novel of the Paranormal by Deborah J. Lightfoot. A post-apocalyptic, paranormal, gritty modern Western.

The Original Waterspell Quartet

The Waterspell fantasy series by Deborah J. Lightfoot. Will Carin learn the mystery of her past or begin to understand the brooding lord who has taken her hostage? Epic fantasy in a four-book series.

The Waterspell Linked Sequels

The Waterspell Homecoming Duology by Deborah J. Lightfoot: The Karenina Chronicles and The Fires of Farsinchia, two linked sequels in the Waterspell universe.

Showcasing a Series

I seldom find any reason to praise Amazon, but I do like the new modules that authors can customize for our books’ A-Plus Content. The ability to assign multiple ASINs to each module is extremely valuable for showcasing a series. The four-book image, WATERSPELL Fantasy Series, shows up on each of those four individual book pages and also on the related page for the boxed set. The two-book image shows up on The Karenina Chronicles page and again on The Fires of Farsinchia page. Grouping the books in this way gives the reader a visual summary of the quartet (which is really one long story told in four volumes), and then the two-book image ties together the linked sequels that tell of Nina’s homecoming and her further adventures.

I don’t know whether this new A-plus content will make the books more visible at Amazon, or affect their ratings, but I like how the modules look on the individual book pages. Over time, I may further refine the content. As a product of a couple hours’ work, however, these three modules present my books in a way that satisfactorily makes the connections among them more obvious to the casual book-shopper. That’s a plus, indeed.

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A New Review for My New Book!

The first review is in for my latest, ADVERSE REACTIONS: A Novel of the Paranormal, and it’s a five-star gem! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ UK reader Alex Longbow shared this on Amazon:

ADVERSE REACTIONS: A Novel of the Paranormal by Deborah J. Lightfoot

5.0 out of 5 stars
Another brilliant book from Deborah J Lightfoot!
Reviewed in the United Kingdom on March 20, 2026
Format: Kindle
Verified Purchase

Deborah J Lightfoot’s work is always a must read for me, and I have hugely enjoyed every one of her previous books. These have all taken place in her world of Ladhredin, a world that has become very real to me through the pages of her books. This new work, Adverse Reactions is a new departure for her, and an entirely new world is introduced to the reader. I was at once excited and intrigued by this, keen to see where Lightfoot would take me next. It’s fair to say that the world she creates is very different to Ladhredin, with magic playing no explicit part. Instead, paranormal ability takes the place of magic and lies at the core of the book. World building is skilfully managed, with the history, the land and the people introduced on a ‘need to know’ basis, so that the world is brought to us incrementally as the pages turn. I found this to be a very satisfying approach, and one which certainly engaged my interest throughout.

Our main protagonist, Devin, is herself in a process of self-discovery, which proceeds alongside this gradual revelation of the world she lives in. I found her story to be fascinating, her discovery of her own abilities and the revelation of her life history most engaging. In order to discover her true self she negotiates a precarious and engrossing path amongst characters who will variously support or challenge her as the story progresses. Devin has suffered terrible injustices and the manner in which she addresses these through the use of her developing paranormal powers is highly satisfying to the reader.

There is an exceptionally strong cast of characters in Adverse Reactions. The wholesome purity of some key relationships is balanced by Devin’s dealings with some very complex individuals, ones whom the reader is kept wondering whether they truly represent enemy or ally. In summary, Adverse Reactions is a thoroughly engrossing read, that offers some hints that there may be more to come from this context. I hope there is!

Thank you so much, Alex! 💙 I’m enormously grateful for your kind words and fabulous review. 🎉

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To Learn More

Pre-publication reviews are excerpted here:
New Release: ADVERSE REACTIONS
A Bookish Striptease: Cover Reveal
ADVERSE REACTIONS: “Immediately immersive and thematically rich”
My Goodreads “Review” of ADVERSE REACTIONS
Book Launch To-Do List

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ADVERSE REACTIONS: “Immediately immersive and thematically rich”

Today I received some personal good news that I NEEDED! An evaluation score of 8 from an industry professional at The Black List! 🎉

To explain my thrillment, I must first explain The Black List. It’s a “prominent online platform where screenwriters, playwrights, and novelists connect with film, TV, and publishing industry professionals, allowing writers to host scripts/manuscripts, get feedback from vetted readers, and gain exposure to agents, managers, and producers, originally stemming from an annual survey of best unproduced screenplays and now a major hub for discovering new talent and projects. It helps writers get their work seen by industry insiders, offering services like professional evaluations.”

I requested an evaluation of my latest novel, the not-yet-published ADVERSE REACTIONS, and got a glowing response. “Congratulations on your recent evaluation by our reader,” said the email. “Fewer than 5% of the projects hosted on the site have received an overall score of 8 or above.”

The publishing industry professional who reviewed my book gave it an overall score of 8 (out of 10) and posted this:

Strengths

“This novel is immediately immersive, with an opening scene that sucks readers in with vivid sensory detail and a great sense of suspense. In fact, the sensory detail of the book’s prose is one of its strongest qualities … Adverse Reactions is also thematically rich, as Devin faces constant self-doubt but comes to find empowerment in the unique abilities that have made her an outcast. In some ways, the book feels like an extended metaphor about how mental illness is treated in today’s world and what it means to embrace one’s neurodivergence. There is also compelling thematic commentary on modern psychiatric practices and treatment methods, with the author skillfully exploring the negative consequences of supposedly ‘getting well.’ … This novel has few weaknesses.”

Wow! THAT is the sort of reaction that restores my faith in … well, in myself. I have agonized over this book. I started it in 2005; wrote a rough 24,000 words, then shelved it for 20 years; finally “finished” it in 2026.

Now I wait to see if any publisher or filmmaker shows interest in the book. The Black List is sending my work out for additional evaluations, and if the overall score remains at 8 or above, the book will get featured (top-listed) where more industry pros will see it. I’m not getting my hopes up, but this validation of my writing was a great thing to come home to, on the heels of my grocery run this morning. 😍

Prospects

The professional reader’s evaluation closed with an analysis of the book’s prospects. I’m both excited and frustrated by the evaluator’s conclusion:

Adverse Reactions would likely perform quite well among adults and young adults alike. Its accessible style of prose and teenaged protagonist would likely endear it to younger readers, whereas its mature themes and technical accomplishments would likely go a long way with older readers. It would certainly make sense to at least start by marketing the book to pre-existing fans of supernatural/fantasy books, perhaps at special conferences or bookstores that cater to these genres; however, because of the book’s literary merit it could definitely attract readers who would not normally consider themselves ‘genre readers.’ For this reason, it would be important to make sure the book receives coverage from reputable book-related publications and/or prominent figures in the literary community.”

Well, OK. I can certainly market the book to pre-existing fans of supernatural/fantasy books, most especially the loyal readers of my Waterspell series. If I self-publish, I might be able to get it into bookstores and possibly hand-sell it at conventions and the like. But how in the world do I get coverage from reputable book-related publications or prominent figures in the literary community? If I had those kinds of insider connections, I’d be enjoying a great deal more financial success in my writing career. It goes back to who you know, and I don’t know many people. I’m an introvert and a bit of recluse. <sigh>

But all of that aside, I’m absolutely delighted to get an enthusiastic evaluation from a publishing industry professional. I long ago gave up submitting my work to agents and editors, who take forever to respond, if they deign to respond at all. The Black List removes the tedium of old-fashioned manuscript submission. Their roster of professional readers will respond in one week, or within three weeks at the latest. It’s not free, nor especially cheap. Evaluations cost $150. But Guild members (Writers Guild of America or The Authors Guild) get a substantial discount. I’ve belonged to The Authors Guild since 1995, and thus I paid $120 for the pro evaluation. And because it scored an 8, The Black List is giving me two additional reviews for free! That’s a pretty great deal. 😍

The Black List

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