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Heralds in Fantasy Literature

Heralds, in their original and simplest form, were messengers. In fantasy literature, a herald often brings the message or in some other way triggers the events, sets the events in motion.

In The Hobbit, for example, Gandalf is the herald, or the trigger, that sends Bilbo Baggins off on his grand adventure.

In my Waterspell series, Carin is the herald. Her showing up on the property of the wizard named Verek sets the story action into motion. In effect, she will send Verek off on a quest—and she will participate fully with him on the quest, similar to how Gandalf sets Bilbo into motion and also plays his great role in the events of that story.

But behind Carin in my story, there’s another herald: the character who sets Carin into motion. The events actually begin with that original herald, who is described in Books 1 and 2 as simply “the wisewoman.” Readers won’t know the wisewoman’s whole story until they get to Waterspell Book 3. Immediately at the start of Book 1, however, even before we formally meet Carin in Chapter 1, we see evidence that she’s not acting entirely of her own free will. We learn that the wisewoman has sent her to the wizard Verek.

One thing that complicated the writing of Book 1, Chapter 1, is that I needed to at least hint that Carin isn’t really sure what her goal is, why she’s come north, or what she’s supposed to do when she gets there. She only knows—or she feels, deep in her gut—that she has to be there.

In effect, she’s under a spell—a spell of compulsion. She thinks she’s acting of her own free will, but if she were pressed to explain her motives, she would be hard put to do it. This becomes clearer in Chapter 3, when Verek presses her about her reasons for trespassing on his property. Her explanations don’t satisfy him, and they will—I hope—deepen the sense of mystery that surrounds Carin.

My challenge with Chapter 1 is that many “mainstream” readers expect the main character’s goals and motivations to be clearly laid out right at the start. That’s what they have been taught to expect.

Experienced readers of fantasy, however, will understand that motives and circumstances are often quite murky as the story opens. In Philip Pullman’s The Golden Compass, for instance, the main character, Lyra, has no problem whatsoever as the story opens. She’s having fun. She’s exploring a forbidden part of the college where she lives, and she’s enjoying herself. The big problem that she will face does not become clear for a very long time, as the trilogy unfolds.

So what I’ve tried to accomplish with Chapter 1 of my fantasy series is to present Carin as a strong, active, decisive character, but I have also had to hint that she’s been set on this course, this particular path, by forces beyond her control and by circumstances she did not create. She’s being used, quite frankly, but she’s not a pawn.

In a sense, she’s like King Arthur’s sword, Excalibur. He used the sword—only Arthur as the rightful king could wield it—but Excalibur had magical powers of its own. It allowed itself to be used only by the rightful king.

My girl, Carin, very definitely has a say in how she’s being “used” by the original herald, the wisewoman in the south, and then by the wizard Verek once she follows the wisewoman’s instructions and finds him, up north.

The Book 1 Prologue helps to clarify what’s driving Carin, what her goal is, what problem she must overcome. Here’s an excerpt:

Prologue

The Path Ahead

The wisewoman never asked directly, never demanded of Carin: “Where do you come from, you strange, surprising child? Who are you?” But she breathed her questions in an undertone when she thought Carin couldn’t hear.

Time passed, and the woman watched with shrewd regard, ever wondering. What’s going on, girl, behind those cool green eyes that view the world with such detachment? You’ve borne up patiently these five years, with your gaze cast groundward to hide your thoughts from those who think you have none. Oh, you’re a self-contained little wight, as guarded in your speech as in your glances. You pretend to be indifferent to your past and resigned to your present. But I have seen you puzzling beside the millpond, gazing into its waters, wondering: ‘What brought me here? Where did this journey start, and where do I go now?’

The seasons turned, and at last the wisewoman drew Carin aside. “I have considered carefully. Indeed, child, I have thought of little else. Still I cannot fathom where your journey began. But I clearly see the path that lies before you now.”

The woman did not point. She would not risk drawing anyone’s eye to the pair standing apart. She merely tipped her head, keeping her hand hidden in the folds of her shawls, tightly gripping the amulet she had fashioned against this moment.

“Go north, girl,” she ordered, her gaze locked with Carin’s. “Run from here. You have no home in this village. Granger is much too hidebound and suspicious for the likes of you. Your place is in the North. If you belong anywhere, child, you belong there.”

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Author Websites by BookBub

A complete makeover of my author website has been on my To-Do list for years. I’m well aware that this site (which you have somehow found, gentle reader, if you’re reading this post — thank you!) looks quite dated. Its dimensions are geared toward the smaller desktop screens of yesteryear, and it is NOT optimized for phones and tablets. And the content: Oh my! “What a tangled web we weave!” This site has become a catch-all scrapbook of my bookish enterprises. I have added pages and interlinked them until the whole thing borders on labyrinthian.

I am held back, however, from attempting to change the theme of this WordPress site because I dread the possibility of catastrophically scrambling the whole messy thing. When I read advice about “staging sites” and code snippets, my blood runs cold.

Simply starting over with a new site is probably easier than attempting to update this existing monster. I have made a small start in that direction by accepting BookBub’s offer of a free “Author Pages” website. I won’t pay $10 a month for their “pro” version, but so far their free plan is giving me everything I need:

  • Author Bio
  • Books — descriptions and buy links
  • Social Media links
  • Blog
  • Updates (an example is shown here)
  • Reviews (what they call Praise)
  • Contact page
  • Other Writing — a page for linking to my essays, articles, short stories, etc.

The content that is only available with a Pro plan is nothing that I would consider essential:

  • Events (those could be listed in the Updates section)
  • FAQs (nice to have as a separate page, but the info could be included on the Contact page in its optional “Personal message” section)
  • Media Coverage (could go under Reviews, or in the Blog or the Updates)
  • Press Kit (“Other Writing,” maybe, or worked into the Author Bio)
  • Custom Pages (yikes! Being able to add any number of pages to a website is what led to my current monster in the first place. Having a finite set of pages is more appealing to me.)

I don’t even mind the default address: deborahjlightfoot.author-pages.com. The “author-pages.com” extension is appropriate, and it looks a heck of a lot better than the “ag-sites.net” which is the default for websites hosted by the Authors Guild.

For now, therefore, I plan to slowly expand my free Author Pages site, courtesy of BookBub. Considering how much money I’ve spent with them over the years, running BookBub ads that always have a negative ROI, I figure they owe me a free basic website. Their strategy, I imagine, will turn out to be bait-and-switch: after enough authors have invested enough time and effort in developing their free sites, BookBub will probably discontinue the free plan and try to force everyone to pay $10 a month for the Pro version.

Sorry if that sounds cynical, but there is a vast industry dedicated to separating writers from their money. “Free” generally comes with massive strings attached.

If you have set up a website through BookBub — either Free or Pro — I would love to hear your thoughts. And if you have advice on how to update this aged, bloated website (the site you’re looking at right now) without breaking the thing, please get in touch! I need the help and some hand-holding through the perilous process.

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A Riveting Listen: The Waterspell Audiobook

"My daughter and I are enjoying these great audiobooks on our cross-country drive. I love the narrator! He really brings the words to life." (From a review of WATERSPELL: Boxed Set, Books 1-4 by Deborah J. Lightfoot, narrated by Simon de Deney.

Writers tend to get laser-focused on their latest release, but a solid backlist deserves love, too! I’m super proud of the four-book audio production of my Waterspell fantasy quartet. Narrator Simon de Deney did a masterful job. As this listener notes (see the picture): “He really brings the words to life.” And his ability to voice female as well as male characters is remarkable. Simon embodies the brooding warlock but he also delivers a totally believable young woman who is all bravado on the outside but terrified on the inside. Bravo! 🎉

If you’re planning a road trip this summer — or maybe a staycation, given the current (2026) price of fuel — give this 51-hour epic a listen. It’ll keep you engaged.

📢 1 credit at Audible for all four books.

Also available at other audio retailers with prices starting at $16.95.

WATERSPELL audiobook by Deborah J. Lightfoot, narrated by Simon de Deney. 51 hours of audio. Four books. 1 credit at Audible. Reviewers say: "Fantastic storytelling." "A voice that immerses you in a fantasy world both foreign and familiar. You won't want to leave." "Addictive epic fantasy. 
Five stars."

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